【写作模式】
叙文按照“开端一发展一高潮一结局”的顺序进行叙述。文章的开头，通常要交代事件发展的时间、地点、有关人物间的相互关系等内容，帮助读者理解事件的本身。但为了避免写文章时漫无目的，同时也为了使读者对作者意图更加明了，我们通常有必要在文章开头给出全文的主题。
比如:
(1)He is a great person in history.
(2 )Last Sunday，I took the G R E.It was the longest test I had ever taken.
(3 )My middle school years were the best part of my life.
【佳作赏析】
请根据下面的要点叙述一次看马戏的经历。
1. 期中考试后放了三天假，我看了一场马戏。
2.表演非常精彩。有小狗表演，独轮车表演等。最刺激的节目是走钢丝。一个男演员手里拿着一根平衡杠，头上坐着一个女孩，肩上的钢杠上还挑着两个女孩。当他小心翼翼走过钢丝的时候，观众报以热烈的掌声。
3. 马戏是一种力与美结合的艺术。通过这次表演，我体会到了中国马戏艺术的博大精深。
参考词汇：马戏表演circus show 刺激的thrilling 钢丝tightrope 平衡杆balancing pole 钢杆steel bar
<范文>
Watching a circus show
I had a three-day holiday after the mid-term examination, so I decided to relax myself by watching a circus show.
A girl appeared on the stage. She rode a one-wheel bike on a small table with a lot of flowers on it. She didn’t knock down even one flower. Some little dogs also did a good job. The four little dogs did some amusing tricks and one of them could calculate the number! How clever they were!
The most thrilling program was to see a young man walking on a tightrope. He stood on the very thin rope with a balancing pole on his hands. On his head sat a little girl. Another two girls sat on the ends of a steel bar on his shoulder. The young man took his first step with great care. The rope held. One step! Two, three.... Every viewer held his breath. All the people were anxious about his safety, because the young actor didn’t fasten a safety belt. Any little carelessness could cost his life! At last he succeeded in walking across the 8-meter-long tightrope.
The performance lasted about two hours. I had a good time at the show.
The circus is the art of combination of strength and beauty. The Chinese circus is so cool!
<点评>
小作者叙述了一次看马戏的经历。文章以时间为线索，叙述清楚，详略得当，层次分明，描写生动，过渡自然，显示了作者相当扎实的语言功底。在文章最后，小作者还谈了自己的感想，深化了主题。难能可贵的是小作者使用了较多的高级 表达方式，使文章增彩不少。如：复合形容词（onewheel, 8-meter-long），with复合结构（with a balancing pole on his hands），倒装句（On his head sat a little girl），感叹句（How clever they were!）等。
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