高二英语作文:狭隘的学习要不得

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编辑点评: 写英语作文要语言基本无误。所谓语言无误,包含两层意思,一是用词准确,能充分表达原意。二是语法规范,符合英语习惯。写出来的句子,读起来语感正常,不牵强附会,不生搬硬套,通篇读完,有英语味道。

图描述的是现在许多学校教育的现状。请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文,描述一下其反映的现象,分析该现象的错误所在并对如何纠正错误发表你个人的看法。

 


 

注意:

1.仔细品味图中所反映的现象,要适当发挥想象,不要做简单描述。

2.词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。

3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

One possible version:

From the picture, we can see that many branches of a tree, which stand for different kinds of abilities in school education, have been cut off by a strong saw. Only the smaller branch “study” is reserved.

It in fact reflects an educational practice in some schools, where the goal of education is limited to study only. To make room and save time for study, activities for developing students’ organizing ability, communicating ability, practicing ability and so on are all considered unimportant and hence removed.

In my personally view, this kind of education is quite unqualified. A good education should focus on one’s overall development. Therefore, necessary measures must be taken to stop this kind of education. On one hand, education authorities must change their evaluation standards to guide schools back into the correct direction. On the other hand, students themselves should be responsible for their own development and seize every opportunity to broaden their abilities. I believe by doing so, things will be better and better.

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