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Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. I’ve seen your ad, and I’d like to know more about your six-week English course. First when the course will start and how many class hours there are per week? Besides, I hope there would not be too many students in each class. I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether the accommodation is included. Is there a host family or a university dormitory?
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
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