高考英语作文中的高级结构:巧妙的改写

所属专题:2016高考英语作文预测  来源:    要点:高考英语作文  
编辑点评: 通过研读一些优秀的学生习作和历年高考书面表达的范文,我们发现,很多所谓的高级句型和高级词汇正是我们老师反复讲解和训练的。下面小编列举一些常见且高级的词汇和句型,供同学们参考。

◆ 巧妙的改写

(1)Only 改成no one but

Only Tom passed the exam last week. → No one but Tom passed the exam.

(2)as soon as …改成No sooner…than…/Hardly…when…/Immediately…/The moment

No sooner had we arrived at the cinema than the film started.

(3)have sb/sth do/done

The girl was knocked off her bicycle and had her leg broken (her leg was broken.).

(4)变换插入语的位置

① However, they suggest fees should be charged low. →

They suggest, however, fees should be charged low. (NMET 2002)

② I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese. →

This is a good chance for you, I think, to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese. (2004 全国卷Ⅰ)

(5) 用同位语代替非限制性定语从句

Meimei, who is seven years old, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days.→

Meimei, a girl of thirteen, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days. (2002上海卷)

Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world.(2008年湖南卷)
  

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