高考英语作文指导:议论文

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编辑点评: 高考议论文是高考英语作文的难题,其观点论述、论据阐述都是需要学习者很扎实的基本功。才能做到逻辑严密,结构清晰,语言洗练,言而有据。

写作典例:

暑假即将来临,你班同学就假期计划进行讨论,提出了不 同看法,请根据提示写一篇英语短文,并谈谈你的看法。

优点 缺点
呆在家中 花费少,舒适方便 不能亲自了解外界

外出旅游 增长知识,开阔眼界 花费多,旅途不便

注意:

1.词数120左右(不含已写好部分)

2.短文必须包括表中所列要点,可根据内容分段表述;

3.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯;

4.参考词汇:眼界horizon(view)

案例分析

这是一篇典型的议论文体的写作,它以表格的形式提出了论点(呆在家中的优点和缺点以及外出旅游的优点和缺点)和论据,还以文字提示形式提出了话题(假期计划)及需要考生自由发挥的部分(你的看法),自己的看法可选择上述中的任何一种,并就此发表个人的见解。本文的重点是表格中两种方式的优,缺点,根据题目的特点,以三段式的形式来写作比较好。

根据内容,尽管讨论已经发生,但它是就一般的暑假假期计划而进行的讨论,没有特定的时间界定,因而考生应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。相当一部分考生用一般过去时进行论述,这会失掉较多的分数。从题目所给的开头可知应用第一人称来写。

范文:

The summer holiday is coming. Our class have a discussion about what to do during the holiday.

Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it's both convenient and comfortable. What's more, they can save money for other purposes. But they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world. However, others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden the ir horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.

In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home, for I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and helping my parents with the housework.

针对练习

1.诚信是处世之本。但是在中学生当中,考试作弊、抄袭作业 、欺骗家长和老师等现象屡见不鲜。请你对以上种种现象作简要描述,并以How to guar antee honesty为题,从三个方面,谈谈如何保证学生做到诚信。

注意:

1.词数:120左右;

2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

How to guarantee honesty

As we all know, honesty is a lways an essential principle of living. Much to our regret, however, …
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Honesty is the best policy, which is what we should keep in mind all the time.

【参考范文】------One possible version:

As we all know, honesty is always an essential principle of living. Much to our regret, however, it is nothing new that some middle school students cheat in exams, copy others’ homework and fool their teachers and parents. Therefor e, how to guarantee honesty should come to our attention.

Personally, I think honesty education is necessary. For instance, courses on hone sty can be offered to students; activities like story-te lling and lectures are also worthy trying. With the concept of “being honest” rooted in their minds, honesty can be reflected in their daily life and study. Besides, related rules an d regulations should be laid down. Detailed criteria should be applied to evaluate students in aspects such as homework, tests, relationship with teachers and parents.Then, strict measures should be carried out to puni sh those who cheat, and consequently, they must assume responsibility for their bad behavior, thus considerably reducing chances of cheating next time.

Honesty is the best policy, which is what we should keep in mind all the time.

本文是一篇开放式的作文,只提出了一个话题“How to guarantee honesty”,话题非常切合学生实际生活,让每个学生都有话可写。此题留给学生了一定的想象空间,有利于优生的发挥。文章的人称以一、三人称为主;时态为一般现在时;本文可用三段成文形式成文。内容要点: 1. 学生中存在的作弊现象;2. 解决这一现象的方法;3. 总结要点。

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