高考英语作文:11江苏卷

所属专题:2016高考英语作文预测  来源:沪江高考资源网    要点:高考英语作文  
编辑点评: 为了帮助同学们在平时写作练习的时候时刻牢记英语写作的基本要领,特编顺口溜如下:细审题,巧构思,列要点,防遗漏。写日记,同汉语;书信,通知格式要牢记。看清图表细梳理,写人记事按顺序;完稿后查遗漏,整洁干净莫忘记。

下面是幅照片,表现了女儿为妈妈拿包的情景“to ease the pain in her back, I remove the heavy load from mom’s shoulder” (图略)

你短文应包括:1.描述照片的内容 2. 结合自身情况谈谈你的感想 3.举例说明你能为家长肩负做些什么

范文:

The burden of students has been a hot topic for many years, but the load of parents has received little attention ,especially from their own children .

The picture shows us a touching moment when a little comes to greet her working mother . Realizing that her mother must be very tired after a day’s work , the girl helped to remove the bag from her shoulder. In response , the mother kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels.

All that reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best. But , totally engaged in studies , I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels, and always think studying is the only thing I could do in return .Now I know I can do my bit to help with the everyday washing , bedroom cleaning ,or at least prepare breakfast myself , so as to share mom’s daily burden. The picture convinces me that it is even more important to be a good daughter than a “good” student”.

【PS:特此声明,因为排版要求,所以本系列文章将书信最末的署名和Yours 或者With best wishes等祝福语放在左边,请同学们在书写的时候记得还是按书信的格式,写在信的右下角。】

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