名师指导:2015年上海高考英语卷翻译部分

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编辑点评: 本文由汪冠林老师撰写,文中他对2015年上海高考英语翻译部分,做了详细解析以及衍生辅导,便于同学们对于高考英语翻译部分考察的重点和难点有更深入的理解和把握。

本文由汪冠林老师撰写,汪老师现为悉尼大学在读博士,曾上海四校英语教师。

2015年上海英语高考卷翻译部分

1. 美食是人们造访上海的乐趣之一。(visit

重点难点:美食=delicious/tasty/palatable food/cuisine “之一”提示可数名词要要复数,如one of the pleasures,但fun不可数,可用单数。造访:pay a visit to/visit

Delicious food is one of the pleasures for people to visit Shanghai. (简约版)

Gourmet(名词形容词皆可用,名词表美食家,形容词表美味的)/Rich/Fine /Tasty/

Yummy(儿童口语)/palatable/Inviting/Tempting(秀色可餐的)food/ cuisine/delicacy (美味佳肴) is one of the pleasures/ delights/ fun for people who pay a visit to Shanghai. (衍生版)

补充词汇:gourmet  n.  美食家adj. 形容词美味的 foodie n. 吃货delicacy n.美味佳肴

juicy/succulent(多汁美味的)/ drooling/mouthwatering(垂涎欲滴的) food

2. 街头艺术家运用创意将鲜艳明亮的颜色带进了老社区。(bring)

重点难点:考查词组bring sth. to…  “运用创意”可用介词词组灵活表达:with creativity/originality/creative/inventive/original ideas.

Street artists have brought brilliant colors to old neighborhoods with their creativity. (简约版)

Street artists have brought vivid and bright/shining and brilliant colors to the old neighborhood/ancient community with their creativity/originality/ creative/original/inventive innovative ideas.(衍生版)

补充词汇:creative/inventive/innovative/original ideas可以表示有创造性,创新性和新颖独创的想法。创意也可以用creativity或originality表达。

明亮鲜艳的颜色可用brilliant/ shining / vivid/ bright colors 表达  

bring 的其他词组bring sth. to light 披露曝光/justice绳之以法/life使鲜活,赋予生机活力

3.在你生命中,如果有一个人你需要对他说对不起,那就去向他道歉吧。(apology)

重点难点:考查条件状语从句,定语从句和祈使句(省略句),道歉,说对不起的表达:make an apology/apologize/say sorry. 注意避免重复

If there is someone in your life to whom you need to say sorry/apologize, go ahead and make an apology. (简约版)

In your life, if there is somebody to whom you owe an apology ,  go (straight) ahead and make it/one. (衍生版)

补充词汇:owe sb. an apology欠一个道歉

i.e. Japan owes an apology to Chinese people, who suffered a lot in WWII.  

apology除了表示认错,歉意之外有时也可表示勉强的替代品,借口。

i.e. What he explained was just a lame apology/excuse一个站不住脚,勉强尴尬的借口。

4. 这个游戏的独特之处在于它让孩子学会如何应对现实生活中的问题。(what)

重点难点:独特: unique adj. uniqueness n. what提示要用主语从句,本句翻译还考查名词性从句中的表语从句。“应对”的表达:cope with/ tackle, 比deal with/handle更能表示面对挑战和艰难。

What makes the game unique is that it helps children learn how to cope with problems in real life.(简约版)

What makes the game special/unique/ distinctive /extraordinary is that it helps/enables students to cope with/deal with/tackle/handle problems in their real life.

The uniqueness of the game lies in that it empowers students to address problems/resolve issues in reality. (衍生版)

补充词汇:应对解决问题可以用多种表达,根据文体正式程度可选择:deal with/handle/ cope with/tackle/address/resolve the problems/issues 

“在于”可以中lie in 更形象表达,i.e. Success lies in a combination of diligence and intelligence. 成功在于勤奋和天赋的融和。

5. 申请材料需精心准备,这样你心仪的学校才会对你的能力有全面,准确的了解。(in order that)

重点难点:最后一句翻译往往在结构上和用词上要注意,要用巧劲化解看似中文里“高深地道”的表达,

如“精心准备”careful preparation/prepare carefully 

“心仪的学校” your dream school, the school you like (so much)/you are eager to apply for.,

“全面准确” overall/comprehensive and accurate/precise,

词组“对…了解” have a knowledge/picture of

本句还考查目的状语从句,in order that后跟完整的从句,区分in order to/so as to do sth.

The applications should be carefully prepared in order that the school you like can have an overall and accurate knowledge of your abilities. (简约版)

The materials for application call for/require/demand/ entail careful/devoted preparation in order that an accurate/a precise and comprehensive picture of your ability/capacity/ capability /can be grasped/gained /seen by the school you apply for/by your dream/desirable/ prospective/ideal institution/ it will give a clear and overall picture of your capacity for your dream school. (衍生版)

补充词汇:ability capability capacity在表示能力时基本可以替换,

注意:have the ability to do sth, be capable of doing sth的搭配,  capacity表示能力时,侧重潜质,还可表示容量,身份等其他意思,

i.e. a capacity stadium满座的体育馆,in the capacity of his friend以他朋友的身份。

对…有全面准确的了解have an overall/comprehensive and accurate/precise knowledge/ picture of sb./sth.

Application除了表示申请外(i.e. letter of application),apply for, 还可以表示应用(app 应用软件)

i.e. apply theory into practice;涂抹,

i.e. apply shampoo to one’s hair;

apply oneself to doing sth. 致力于 

He applies/devotes/dedicates himself to teaching the disadvantaged children. 致力于教导弱势群体的孩子

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