2005年高考英语满分作文及名师评析

所属专题:高考英语满分作文  来源:    要点:高考英语满分作文  
编辑点评: 2013高考脚步临近,是否还在为自己不能写一篇行文流畅,层次分明的文章而苦恼,其实看历年的高考英语满分作文是最佳的选择,看文章的亮点所在,学地道、优雅句子,打开高考英语高分作文之门的金钥匙。

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第一节情景作文(20分)
美国中学生jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文,经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华,请给Jeff写一封信,按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。

注意:
1. 信的开头已为你写好。
2.词数不少于60。

Dear Jeff,
I’m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.

While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun.

If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.
Best wishes,
Li Hua

[名师点评]
这篇文章的特点还是比较清晰的,第一,作者根据图画将文章的要点概括完整,内容充实而丰富,结构紧凑,有层次感;第二,本文没有采用华丽的辞藻,但用词十分恰当,段落过渡自然,令人耳目一新。

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