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An unforgettable trip
I ever went to the yellow mountain October in 2003.then I fancied the beautiful prospect of
the mountain before I climbed up it and I longed for the doings.
The second day I got up at six and went to the bus at half past six, and we set out at seven from Nanjing. About at 1:00 pm, we arrived at the foot of the yellow mountain. Firstly we started
to have lunch, and we multiplied a cable car at the middle peak which people call it as liehua peak after we have a full food. Then we beginning to climb up really, when I reach the peak about four hours, I looked down at the perspectives and I forgot the position myself. However I saw the sunrise unforgettably in the second morning, and I thought of the old idiom: limitless landscapes at the dangerous pinnacles.
In short, I love beautiful rivers and mountains in our country. And I don't forget this trip.
问题：1很少有复合句结构；2地点大家都很熟悉，黄山，千篇一律难出彩；3语法错误（阴影处）About at 1:00 pm → At About 1:00 pm reach→reached
Last weekend I went on an eco-travel with a travel agency. All the way we enjoyed the beautiful scenery and fresh air. But a few of us picked flowers as/while going sightseeing. Some even tried to catch the birds they saw. What was worse, many tourists threw rubbish here and there. The rubbish may do harm to wildlife there. I don’t think this is a true eco-travel. A true eco-travel is a tour that not only allows us to express our love for nature, but needs our responsibility as well. As we enjoy the beauty of nature, we should try our best to protect it. And we should also try to protect wildlife. A true eco-travel should be like this: take nothing away but your good memory; leave nothing behind but all the green trees and the clean water.